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Mom, I heard you talking

Posted by candomark on 8/4/2008 11:02:08 PM  - Print This  - Email This

Mom I heard you talking...

Mom, I heard you talking, to the man you called my dad.

The things I heard you saying, have made me very sad.

You say that I'm a problem, 'tho you haven't had me yet.

The words I heard you saying, I never will forget.

You say that you can't have me, that it is too great a task.

Just nine months of your entire life, is that too much to ask?

You say that it's your body, as if sharing it was bad.

I wonder why you say that, you shared it with my Dad.

Conceived within your passion, created by your love,

I did not ask to be here, I'm a gift from God above.

You are my mom, I love you, but why do you hate me?

There is one thing I'm sorry for, your face I might not see.

You say that I'm not human, my heartbeat proves that's wrong.

It is your blood that's in my veins, everyday I grow more strong.

Only three months old today, I already have your smile,

I know someone would want me, can't you carry me awhile?

Although it's called abortion, murder is on your mind.

Where do those thoughts come from? You've always been so kind!

I'd gladly give my life for you, but you're taking it from me.

A night of passion brought me here, yet the love I do not see.

I could never ever hate you, no matter what you choose.

I'll return unto the Father, it's you and dad that lose.

I hope you decide to keep me, I have lots of love to give,

or give me to one who wants me, then at least I'll live.

Please remember this one thing, no matter what you do.

Either way that you decide, Mom I do love you!
 

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Beautiful!
Oh how I wish everyone who was thinking about having
an abortion could read your poem first...
8/7/2008 10:37:05 PM - Ignited~Faith, Member of Delve into Jesus since 2/20/2008


I pray your wonderful story will save lives. Thank you for blessing us with this perspective.
8/10/2008 10:08:00 PM - anonymous


This is beautiful - touching and sad at the same time. Touching because if unborn babies could speak, this is what they probably would say to their mothers, who want to get rid of them, mostly because they are the evidence of their sin. And sad because many women do not see it as murder, but only an easy way out.
9/1/2008 10:50:36 AM - anonymous


I am so greatful to you, this is just what i need, i live in Melbourne Vic, we are facing the problem of adortion, they want to leagalise abortoin up to 9 months, but certianly 24 weeks, i am sending this to where ever God leads me to, please anyone reading this pray, pray for those that can't
9/19/2008 10:05:04 PM - mammak, Member of Delve into Jesus since 9/3/2008



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